2008 ALM

Australian Literary Management,

2A Booth St


NSW 2041

FAO Wenona Byrne

3rd September 2008 

Fictional Historical Romance.  Ximene – The most dangerous woman in the world.

Dear Wenona,

Thank you for returning my telephone call.

This book had its origins in a light hearted project to gain a better understanding of how two women, Alice Perrers and Catherine de Roet had such political influence in the England of the late 1300’s, not a time noted  for female emancipation! We decided there must be a link between the two and for our own entertainment, invented one.

In the same timescale John Stanley progressed from farm boy to end his life as King of the Isle of Man.  We decided that the women might have sponsored his rapid rise!

The result is a book which we believe would appeal to women from twenty five onwards. Our heroine is everything from a teenager looking for romance, to a scheming manipulative politician, a formidable female warrior and a brave selfless stateswoman, sometimes all five concurrently! 

The book runs to 56  chapters and approximately 95,000 words.  In our own test readings we have also obtained an unexpectedly good response from men. The book is finished and has been proof read. Because we have enjoyed the experience of meeting Ximene, we are currently writing a continuation of the story called “Escape from Carcassonne.”

Brian Lilley has extensive experience of tight, focussed technical writing, in support of motivational lecture tours throughout South East Asia and Oceania.  Helen Lilley is a teacher at a major comprehensive in Northern England.  She specialises in English and Drama and has specific expertise in Shakespeare’s historical plays and the poetry of the courts of love..

We enclose as requested, a synopsis and two specimen chapters. We also enclose an addressed, stamped post card which we would be pleased if you would return to us as evidence of receipt.

No publishers have seen the manuscript. Thank you for giving us the opportunity to submit our work for your consideration. 

Regards Brian and Helen Lilley

The most dangerous woman in the world

The Treasure of Trencavel

List of Characters

Table Of Contents



List of Places

Table of Contents

Pseudo History


Extract from The Prisoner of Foix--Chapter 43 -The EntranceNo need to buy a Kindle. Read it on your computer or tablet

John Stanley-26th April 1355


'Looks like we are going to see a bit of excitement, John. The Captain tried to get an agreement from the Prince that if there is surf running across the channel to Arcachon we will turn back to Bordeaux, but the Prince would hear none of it. Instead, he has offered to provide insurance for all three ships. If they are damaged or sunk, the owners will be compensated and every sailor who makes the passage will be given a bounty payment. What none of this seems to take into account is that if we sink in rough, fast-flowing waters we might all drown.'

John raised his eyebrows. 'But that is what we are going to do?'

'Yes, despite the fact that surf running accross the entrance is not uncommon and the deep water channel moves continually. In the end, the Prince attacked their captains on their weakest point, their professional pride! He threw down the gauntlet. He offered to take the Sally first through the channel, and to take control during the passage.' He raised his brow. 'We are going into the Bay of Arcachon, come what may! '

Extract from The Eagle of Carcassone -- Chapter 24-- A Real GoddessNo need to buy a Kindle. Read it on your computer or tablet

John Stanley - 22 July 1355

An hour later John walked with Ximene close to the river along the valley below St Feriole. It was the very essence of a summer’s day. The sun was fierce but in the shadow of the trees, it was cool and fragrant. The trees and shrubs along the riverbank hid their progress, from the Château, from St Feriole.

Eventually they reached a point where John thought it was safe to emerge from cover. To his satisfaction the stream extended into a pool with a sandy beach, shaded by trees. Where the stream entered the pool there was a flat grassy area, almost circular. Behind this, the bulk of two mountain ridges provided a splendid backdrop. He looked around once more ‘Not just a good training ground but a great training ground. If the Greek heroes knew about this they might be tempted to join me, to train with me’

Ximene laughed out loud. He turned to look at her. She had removed her outer clothes and was wearing a white chemise, cut short so that it barely reached her knees. Around her waist, she wore a plaited leather belt, obviously fashioned from the multitude of leather straps to be found in the tackle room.

She ran her hands down over her breasts. ‘When you were unconscious I heard you muttering about gods and goddesses, so  I have decided that from now on, for you, I will be the goddess.’

The Prisoner of FoixVol 1 of the series—The Treasure of Trencavel

Aquitaine, an English possession, is in crisis. It is under threat from neighbouring nations and internal dissension.

The Black Prince, King Edward III’s eldest son has been given the task of taking command in Aquitaine.

Suddenly there is an opportunity. Ximene Trencavel is the heiress to the lands of Occitan, to the east of Aquitaine: lands controlled by the Franks. Ximene wants independence, both for herself and for Occitan.

A union between Aquitaine and Occitan would be mutually beneficial. The Black Prince undertakes a secret journey to meet Ximene to negotiate a marriage contract. It is, however, a marriage neither of them really wants.

Meanwhile, the  Franks plot to murder Ximene to prevent ,not just the marriage, but any kind of union between England and Occitan.

The Eagle Of CarcassonneVol II of the series—The Treasure of Trencavel

The loose alliance between Ximene Trencavel and the Black Prince is under threat.

The Prince invades Occitan, to show his support for Ximene but it becomes an invasion which creates more problems than it solves.

The Prince has fallen hopelessly in love with Joan of Kent and Joan is now determined to marry him and become the next Queen of England.

Joan is therefore  determined to convince Ximene that she should not marry the Prince.

Part of her strategy is to encourage Ximene’s relationship with John Stanley—one of the Princes bodyguards—not an easy task as both John and Ximene have doubts about their compatibility.

However, John is grievously injured in a battle and Ximene commits herself to nurse him back to health.